about as wrong as you can get. to start with, your light will be permantly on (after all, you havent switched anything at switch 1 connections)
and if you operate switch 2, it will go bang
your also best starting at switch 1 and taking feed from switch 2.
basically, neutral goes from switch 1 to 2, and then to light. earth to light, via each backbox. incoming live at switch 1 to common. common at switch 2 is sw. to light. L1 & L2 of switch 1 to L1 & L2 of intermediate. other L1 & L2 of intermediate to L1 & L2 of switch 2. and your done