There's so many things on that drawing that are a bit WTH but there is no point in expanding on any of them as they would be sorted in 5 minutes by whoever is doing the job so no need to teach you all about the regs etc here. Like why 2 submains and CU's from the main DB? How dod you arrive at 16mm² cables? There is no such thing as 83A. The note about the board not being the DNOs, well yes, obviously. They don't own anyones 3 phase DB, that's not how it works.... etc.....
Just mark where you want sockets etc and leave it at that. Don't try and design the socket locations around what circuit you think you need, like where you have 2 sockets on a wall and you think you need a ring to have more, and you also say that there is a spur at the end but it isn't because it is a radial. All nonsense, just mark the sockets and hand the drawing over.
I do a lot of work for someone that gives me things like this, absolute nightmare, you have to back it up a few steps and work out why he is doing some of the things he is doing then you find out the whole thing is designed around a laymans misunderstanding of some technical point.
You've said in your profile you are time served, hopefully this is not true? The more I look at this the more I think I'd turn the job down.